Today we start our Short Story Series where we post stories either true live stories or fictional written by yours truly or any other blog visitors who would love us to publish their stories on this platform.
We are starting right way with short stories from our new contributor Kelvin Alaneme on a series titled TRAPPED......Enjoy and let me have your feedback.
Part 1.....
Start...
'Oh No! Not again!' I muttered under my
breath. But the offensive smell cannot lie. As I cringed my nose away
from the pungent smell, I hesitantly rose up to do what had
inadvertently become a routine in the past two weeks: cleaning watery
shit. For the fifth time that morning, Jide had soiled himself. As I
slowly undid the rope girding his trousers, I looked at the figure lying
helplessly on the bed in the solitary ward. Bag of bones. Skeleton. No
word can succinctly describe him. The man I loved had become less than a
shadow of himself. His cheek bones jutted out, a complete caricature of
the man I fell in love with eight years ago.
I was closing my
shop one evening when he approached me, young, handsome, fresh-faced. He
was carrying a traveling bag. 'Madam, please, I just arrived Lagos and I
am kinda stranded,' he said in a rich baritone. 'I really need a place
to spend the night and sort myself out,'he pleaded persuasively. I was
then a burgeoning tailor, doing well by all 'Lagos' standards: had many
rich customers, lived in a flat, had two shops and three student
tailors. I looked him head to toe, his chubby face cutting a pathetic
picture. "I don't really oblige strangers but I am making an exception
for you. Just one night."'Plenty thanks,' he said, effusing with
gratitude. "I'm Jide,"he said. 'Stella,' I replied, curtly.'
He
followed me to my apartment. It was three blocks away from the shop. I
learn't that night he was the first son in a family of five, and he had traveled to Lagos from the East in search of greener pasture. He had
undergone apprenticeship with a tailor in Aba but absconded just a year
before the agreed seven years' training, citing maltreatment as an
excuse. He went on to show me some of his clothes which he claimed to
have sown himself. 'Hmmm... Impressive. You must be a very good tailor
then,' I told him. 'Maybe,' he said, blushing. The rest of the night was
calm.
One night turned to one week. And one week turned to one
month. Jide was charming at his best, manipulative at his worst. But I
allowed him to stay. Maybe because he had nowhere else to go. I fed him
and took care of his financial needs. My boyfriend was mad when he
learn't that Jide was staying with me. I tried to make him understand and
when he couldn't, we split. Gradually, things between us got
physical...we became intimate. I gave him a space in my second shop and
help him start off his tailoring. He turned out to be better than he
claimed. Soon, he was doing very well. But he had one big flaw: women.
At first, I was flattered. That my man was the toast of ladies. Then it
became irritating. And out rightly embarrassing. He would disappear after
close of work, only to return at midnight. Reeking of alcohol and
looking ruffled. I tried to stomach it, partly because people have come
to know us as a couple. And partly because I was two months pregnant for
him.The day I threatened to throw him out, he beat me into a pulp. I
miscarried the next day. After my miscarriage, he begged me fervently to
forgive him and promised to turn a new leaf. Two months later, he told
me he want to meet my people. He has never said that before. 'Why?' I
queried. 'Because, I'll like to marry you,'he said, holding my hands. I
was dumbstruck.
'Hmmm...Stella,' Nkechi began. 'Who is that
dude?' 'He is my boyfriend o!' I replied giggling. We had visited my
relatives in Apapa and my younger sister had called me aside.'What?' I
asked, noticing the frown on her face. "I don't like him,' she said
emphatically.'He looks too flashy.' I laughed her off. 'Young girls,' I
wondered. 'What do they know?' We later traveled to my village at
Jide's request. He met my parents and promised to come with his people
soon. We also went to his village and met his people. When he told them
all I did for him, they were overflowing with gratitude. His mother even
took him aside and made him promise her that he would marry no other
but me. We came back to Lagos. Four years passed. No other mention of
the marriage matter. To make issues worse, everybody around thought that
we were married. And I couldn't help but answer his 'madam'. His
womanizing took another turn. He started bringing different women to our
house. My house. I was six months pregnant for him and didn't want to
make a fuss to avoid another miscarriage. Almost every night, I cry
myself to sleep and struggle to block out their sensual moans.
'The doctor will like to see you,' the elderly nurse told me. I had gone
for my antenatal clinic and was told to carry out some tests. 'Madam,'
the doctor began, looking me squarely in the face. 'Your test results
just came out. Ultrasound scan showed your baby is doing well.' 'Thank
God,' I gasped. 'You also tested positive for HIV I and II.' 'What?' I
screamed. 'How come?' I pressed, confused. "I don't sleep around. I have
been faithful to one man and last year when I did this test, it was
negative!" 'Has your man been faithful to you?' the doctor
asked,quizzically. 'Hell no!' I muttered, inaudibly. 'Jide has killed
me!' I sobbed, uncontrollably. I was started on Anti-Retroviral drugs to
prevent the virus from infecting my baby. I was broken when I got home.
I told him everything and pleaded with him to get tested. After two
weeks, he agreed. And he was positive too. His CD4 count was done. It
was 300. He was started on Anti-retrovirals too. Problem is, he never
took his drugs. I gave birth to a bouncing baby girl, whom I named
Victory. And I never stopped taking my drugs.
Two years passed. I
noticed rashes all over Jide's body. When I asked him, he told me it
was the scars of chicken pox he had as a child. But the rashes kept
coming. He also began to lose weight. And he started coughing. The cough
defied all cough medications. Then, he started stooling frequently.
Everyone knew my man was sick. Very sick. I took him to the hospital.
And the doctor dropped the bombshell. Jide's HIV has progressed to AIDS.
If he is started on medications, he will recover. We spent a month in
the hospital, he recovered and was discharged on medications. He started
taking his drugs, and regained some of his weight.
One
evening,I entered the room with Victory and met him jumping and
screaming. 'What happened?' I asked, astonished. 'I have been healed of
my HIV,'he shouted with glee, emptying the cup containing the
anti-retroviral drugs into the toilet. 'Stop!' I shouted, but it was too
late. 'I am free!' he continued. 'Why not do a test before you
conclude?' I asked. 'God healed me and you are talking of test?'he
retorted, with a smirk on his face. I shook my head in disbelief and
entered the adjacent room. I paused at the mirror. I barely recognized
who I saw. A tired, famished, weary girl in her late-twenties trapped
with a stubborn, dubious and unfaithful mad man.
©Kelvin Alaneme, 2014
Wow!!! This is so nice,waiting for part2
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DeleteInteresting! Can't wait for the rest
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